I'm very excited about this game! Much more now that I have an idea how it works. I have a few questions and suggestions.
CONCEPTS__________
If you hit $0, is it going to be like one of those games where you have no real hope of winning but you drag yourself along for the sake of the other players? I think the promoters should be lifting themselves out of the gutter. The bookies should have minimum bets on all fights and going bankrupt at least once should be common. Then give players the loan shark option. I really think betting, bribing and borrowing would be a nice trinity of transgression.
Under Venues & Bribes it says "Requires $50 bribe" and "Requires $150 bribe". Then under Fouls & Exceptions, it says 50/50 chance of raid if bribe was not paid. So I guess it's not required?
Here's an idea: It would be cool if both promoters had the option to pay the bribe but neither of them knew if the other had paid it unless/until the place gets raided.
Can I bribe your fighters to take a dive?
Can you bet on a fight between two fighters from your own stable?
You can't train for Chin. Can you train for Draw?
Can a Tomato Can become a Champion or are Champions born?
CLARIFICATIONS__________
I'm not clear on how the cards work. You use 30 or 36 cards but only one card per round (so 10 or 12) cards? Then it says, "The game draws one cards." Huh?
Here's a more concise way to describe the 'ducking' aspect:
If you offer at least 65% in a title challenge to a rival promoter and they decline, your fighter receives a bump (+1) to his Draw as this is considered 'ducking' by the champion.
I think "Venues have three tiers." is wrong. Shouldn't it be something like, "Each venue is at one of three tiers."?
Is TKO an actual outcome? Is that marked the same as a KO on a fighter's record?
Does high score after 10 rounds constitute a third win condition?
Is Hall of Fame 10LP or 3LP? The manual says both.
It mentions that hype increases the gate but it doesn't say how much. Knowing that would help make informed decisions.
NITS__________
Could use some page numbers here. FYI, 16 pages is a perfect number for printing booklet style.
The 'Scouting Phase' is mentioned once. Should that be the Marketing Phase?
Little things like 'Click' would only apply to the online version.
Under the phase breakdowns where it says 'Elibible Players', it's always 'All Players'
"But Blue is a long shot..." doesn't need the 'But'.
"Can't train a chin." maybe doesn't need the 'a'.
"Wager is incorect" is a strange way to describe losing a bet.
It should be 'versus' or 'vs.' not 'verses'.